Avens Dolor

I loved this! Very well written and a nice spin on a common topic. That said, I still have a few nitpicks/questions: 1. He was wrapped in his usual dark, ...

I don't have the time to go over this just yet, but I'm glad that you spent the time to work on it. I'll be out of town for the ...

Comments in red. The door slammed shut, grating slightly across the wooden floor. Avoid adverbs when at all possbile; besides, something either grates or it doesn't, right? A lock is ...

Obviously things being popular doesn't make them bad, but being bad can make things popular. If you follow me. There's a lot of downsizing going on. People don't read much, ...

I'll go ahead and join the flood by saying both, however I really do love giving tips. It's not my big ego, I promise! I just love working with new ...

Comments in red! There is no world but here; there is no time but now. This would read better as two separate sentences, to slow down the reader. "There is ...

Comments in red. ***Prologue to a story I thought of in school, tell me what you think.*** The Letter There was a letter, and it was on his desk. Harry ...

Comments in red. If you’re looking for a fantastic adventure with magnificent creatures and wonderful knights in shining armor, then go away "then go away": I'd say that this might ...

This is a bit belated, I think, but I saw chapter two and figured I should read chapter one first, haha. I warn that my edits get pretty in-depth, so ...

Does their website state how long they take, on average, to respond to queries? Be careful to wait until the end of that period before you send anything at all. ...

Because if we stopped to think, our brains would explode. Why does the person next to me keep playing "Fergalicious" over and over?

If you only needed the one interview, then I'm glad you got it. If you need another, feel free to pm me. I'm not published or anything, but I've won ...

A lot of people have suggested taking a short break from working on your novel, and while I agree it's best to note that it should be a reasonable break. ...

High-five, fellow grad! And fellow photographer! I'm convinced that photographer-writer-2008 grads will take over the world one day. We're a powerful breed.

Congrats on the novel! I'm pretty vetted when it comes to editing, so if you need any help, feel free to let me know. I'd suggest letting it sit for ...